Is my landing page OK
2013-09-23, 10:46 PM,
(This post was last modified: 2013-12-10, 08:05 PM by Alienware.)
#1
Just want advice of my seniors. Is this is a good landing or something that i can improve. Critics are welcome Cool

Url - http://********************.blogspot.com/
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Aesculus(2013-12-21 04:15 PM) LieToMe(2013-12-12 09:14 AM) 

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2013-09-23, 10:47 PM,
#2
im no pro or nothing but it looks great!

did you make it? or you found and edited it?
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Alienware(2013-09-23 10:51 PM) 
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2013-09-23, 10:49 PM,
#3
Change the background and remove the 'powered by', 'subscribe to' etc from your landing page.
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Alienware(2013-09-23 10:51 PM) 

Manga <3 best. thing. ever
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2013-09-23, 10:53 PM,
(This post was last modified: 2013-09-23, 10:53 PM by Alienware.)
#4
(2013-09-23, 10:47 PM)Docok Wrote: im no pro or nothing but it looks great!

did you make it? or you found and edited it?

Its very easy to make this type of template using blogger template editor :)
It doesn't take more than 5 minutes to make this template Smile

(2013-09-23, 10:49 PM)molabee Wrote: Change the background and remove the 'powered by', 'subscribe to' etc from your landing page.

OK. Anything more that can i improve or add Smile

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2013-09-23, 10:54 PM,
#5
If you dont want competition, then remove your blog link.

Install. Responsive T template
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Alienware(2013-09-23 11:00 PM) 
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2013-09-23, 10:55 PM,
#6
wut are those two detections from virus total.. fix that..
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Alienware(2013-09-23 11:00 PM) 
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2013-09-23, 10:56 PM,
#7
Quote:Its very easy to make this type of template using blogger template editor :)
It doesn't take more than 5 minutes to make this template Smile

Shock i must know do teach please :)
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Alienware(2013-09-23 11:01 PM) 
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2013-09-23, 10:58 PM,
#8
(2013-09-23, 10:49 PM)molabee Wrote: Change the background

This. That background hurt my eyes, not good if you want to keep people on your page. Other than that, looks fine Wink

MAYBE purchase a domain too if the niche is profitable enough.
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Alienware(2013-09-23 11:01 PM) 
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2013-09-23, 10:59 PM,
(This post was last modified: 2013-09-23, 11:00 PM by Aeon Enfinity.)
#9
Yeah, make the background my World of Tanks appropriate. Removed the subscribe and powered by at the bottom like suggested above, and I'd also remove the Home link at the bottom as the only page is this one. Most importantly, the virus scan you attached has two virus detections in it...no one is going to download this.

Lastly, I'd like to help you out by rewriting the content on the page for you to appear more "English" for your users. I know you spun the Wikipedia summary of the game, but it honestly makes no sense in the form you currently have it in.

[I]World of Tanks is a popular multiplayer online game developed and published by Belarusian company Wargaming.net. World of Tanks features mid-20th war vehicles, primarily tanks. The game is developed on a freemium business structure with unlimited free-to-play content accompanied by the option to pay for "premium" features. The game is primarily built around player versus player with each player controlling their own tank or armored car. World of Tanks recently debuted as an eSports game at the World Cyber Games in 2012.

Features:
Unlimited Gold Generator for World of Tanks
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Internal Antiban System
100% Virus Free
Updated Daily
100% Undetectable by Wargaming.net Servers

Instructions:

1. Download the hack.
2. Unzip the .zip hack file into a convenient location.
3. Run the hack.
4. Login to your account via the hack.
5. Follow the instructions prompted through the hack.
6. Give the hack 5-10 minutes to connect to the servers and work.
7. Refresh the page and enjoy!

The current version of this tool is V3.0 2013 and works on Windows XP/Vista/7/8 and Mac.

Happy Tanking!
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tbonemaker(2013-09-24 05:16 PM) 
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2013-09-23, 11:05 PM,
#10
(2013-09-23, 10:53 PM)вℓαcк Wrote: OK. Anything more that can i improve or add Smile

Remove the nav bar at the top too. And the virustotal shows 2 detections!! And the content is quite shit like tbh.

Manga <3 best. thing. ever
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