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2014-11-06, 04:10 PM,
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![[Image: a6c1d0d437b50c9743a51bb61c1c247a.png]](http://i.gyazo.com/a6c1d0d437b50c9743a51bb61c1c247a.png)
Give me some comment how I can improve it. It seems legit or not? What do you feel?
:D
Do something better mate.
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2014-11-06, 04:35 PM,
(This post was last modified: 2014-11-06, 04:35 PM by immart247.)
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(2014-11-06, 04:30 PM)!Exclamation Wrote: You can try to use other term for "option". Just my opinion. Can you recommend me some?
(2014-11-06, 04:32 PM)neverstop Wrote: It does bro nice work. thanks. I think it can be improved better :D
(2014-11-06, 04:30 PM)!Exclamation Wrote: You can try to use other term for "option". Just my opinion. Can you recommend me some?
(2014-11-06, 04:32 PM)neverstop Wrote: It does bro nice work. thanks. I think it can be improved better :D
Do something better mate.
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2014-11-06, 05:00 PM,
(This post was last modified: 2014-11-06, 05:06 PM by davd01.)
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change the "option" to "Offer"
"Complete a Free Offer Below & Save $XX" $xx is the cost of the plugin
Correct the Spelling "Lincense" to "License"
And would be better if you change the last line to"By installing the plugin, you agree to Adobe's Terms Of Service"
Hope it helps
Procrastination makes easy things hard, hard things harder.
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2014-11-06, 05:07 PM,
(This post was last modified: 2014-11-06, 05:11 PM by immart247.)
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(2014-11-06, 05:00 PM)davd01 Wrote: change the "option" to "Offer"
Correct the Spelling "Lincense" to "License"
And would be better if you change the last line to"By installing the plugin, you agree to Adobe's Terms Of Service"
Hope it helps many thanks :)
(2014-11-06, 05:00 PM)davd01 Wrote: change the "option" to "Offer"
"Complete a Free Offer Below & Save $XX" $xx is the cost of the plugin
Correct the Spelling "Lincense" to "License"
And would be better if you change the last line to"By installing the plugin, you agree to Adobe's Terms Of Service"
Hope it helps
after modification:
![[Image: 03e291c45135f5ffba5fc5a6ace195a3.png]](http://i.gyazo.com/03e291c45135f5ffba5fc5a6ace195a3.png)
I'm in movie niche so this is plugin missing to play the video.
Do something better mate.
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2014-11-06, 05:41 PM,
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movie niche huh> Create another widget with the following and check which converts better and improve from there
"You need the latest Premium Flash Player Plugin to watch this Video"---> 1st Line
"Complete an offer below and Download For Free"
Procrastination makes easy things hard, hard things harder.
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2014-11-06, 05:43 PM,
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try to add copyright also it may look more genuine.
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2014-11-06, 05:53 PM,
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(2014-11-06, 05:41 PM)davd01 Wrote: movie niche huh> Create another widget with the following and check which converts better and improve from there
"You need the latest Premium Flash Player Plugin to watch this Video"---> 1st Line
"Complete an offer below and Download For Free" ok i will split test.
(2014-11-06, 05:43 PM)neverstop Wrote: try to add copyright also it may look more genuine. where should I put Copyright?
Do something better mate.
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2014-11-06, 05:58 PM,
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just below or side of "by installing" line a small copyright symbol will be enough
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